Punchliners

'Punchliners' will be a six-part mockumentary-style comedy that follows the writing team of a flailing sketch comedy show called Slappity Bam. In the first episode, the audience will be introduced to Jacob, an aspiring young writer who has been drafted in to help revitalise the shows dwindling ratings. The film crew will observe the almost-surreal exploits instigated by the lead writer, Kevin, and his team, through the eyes of an earnest, naïve Jacob. The six episodes will include a story-arc for both Jacob’s personal life and the writing team’s creation of the latest season of 'Slappity Bam'.

The
individual acts of episodes will be bookmarked with sketches from
'Slappity Bam', complete with studio-laughter and professional graphic
titles. The aim of these is to broaden the comedic appeal, in much the
same way that famously successful shows such as Seinfeld and Louie
integrate more instantly accessible humour via stand-up sequences.
Please note, that due to budget restraints when filming the current
pilot (or more accurately, the virtual lack thereof) the sketches
included should not be considered indicative of the quality of the final
product. They'll look and sound much prettier. And you won’t be able
to see the boom guy’s shadow.
The principal cast will consist of
the two main characters, Jacob and Kevin, as well as a secondary cast
consisting of five additional writers, Michelle, Andrew, Nathan, Forrest
and Emma. The pilot episode will explain that Jacob and Michelle are
new to the team. Throughout the start of the series, their preconceived
misconceptions of the team’s questionable professionalism will be a
common source of comedic situations.
'Punchliners' will be
targeted toward an 18-45 year demographic, and will include adult themes
and uncensored coarse language. Like the word ‘cock’.
The pilot
episode for ‘Punchliners’ has already been produced at our own expense,
although will be reshot in its entirety. While this pilot is a decent
indication of our intentions, achieving our funding project and having a
budget capable of accommodating superior equipment will ensure a far
more polished episode.
The painful reality of Australian television in its current form, and indeed for television throughout most of the world, is that risks aren’t being taken. Competition, and indeed money, is incredibly tight between the major Australian networks, and they simply aren’t able to go out on a limb as much as they would clearly like to these days. That’s why they’re forced to stick with safe options like ‘Everyone Loves Raymond' re-runs and the ever reliable ‘dramady’ format. (things like 'Packed to the Rafters', 'Offspring' and 'Winners and Losers'). Sadly, they’ve been burnt by Australian made comedy. It’s with a great deal of embarrassment that we must admit to being a part of a generation living in a country where the most consistently awarded local ‘comedy’ production of our time is the NRL Footy Show. Our dream is for this to change.

As mentioned, the
major networks aren’t really in a position to be able to take risks on the production side of new Australian comedy at the moment. The ABC
and SBS are therefore bombarded with an overwhelming number of pitches, to
the point where unless you’ve blackmailed or kidnapped the Chief
Commissioning Editor’s daughter, you’re not getting on television.
That leaves us with traditional funding methods, such as
Arts Grants and Film Council funding, but these too have their problems.
Investors such as these predominantly want to make films rather than television, because that’s
where the profit and recognition lie. We have a back-up plan for this
(sneakily making the series but cutting down the six episodes to film
length, a la ‘The Trip’) but it remains a secondary option for the time
being.
So that’s where you come in. Crowd-funding gives us the
opportunity to maintain complete creative control over the project,
without having the pressure of private investors breathing down our
necks. We have a target, based on a detailed budget for a two-week
filming period, but we have plans in place for every $1,000 over that
amount. This brings us nicely to...
The six episodes will be filmed over a fourteen-day schedule. The minimum we can do this for is $20,000, however it would mean cutting certain corners that we’d obviously prefer not to. Ideally, we’d like $22,000. This would secure a well-polished, broadcast-worthy final product, without the need for us to perform dark acts in obscure alleyways.
Hitting $25,000 would mark the possibility of filming with two cameras, to avoid all those nasty continuity errors that plague so many single camera shows. With a main-cast of seven people, a simultaneous alternative angle is understandably necessary.

At $28,000, our options for locations to film would have grown. The pilot episode is filmed primarily in an office, but our the next five episodes are set to take place out and about, taking viewers on an expansive tour of the writers’ lives. We need access to bars, restaurants, city streets and even a lawn bowls club. The quality of these locations is an immensely important factor in the project’s presentation.
The big target, as far as securing broadcasting deals, is $30,000. With a budget such as that, we’d be in a position to bring renowned Australian actors in for cameo roles. This would massively increase the marketability of the production and guarantee the show incredible publicity.
Up and beyond this target, the quality of each individual aspect of production would dramatically improve. It would mean better equipment, better locations, better props, more renowned cameo appearances and so much more. The sky would be the limit from $30,000 onwards.
We firmly believe that we have the makings of something very special, and we advise you check out the pilot to see for yourself. It was created on a very limited budget, so it should give your some indication of what we’re capable of putting together with more considerable funding. As previously mentioned, we will be re-shooting the entire first episode once we’ve achieved our funding target. The sound quality isn’t perfect in the pilot, especially in the Slappity-Bam sketches, and there’s a large amount of other changes and tweaks that we intend to implement. The character Kevin being somewhat retooled to be a more realistic age, for example.
So please, sit back and enjoy the first episode of ‘Punchliners’. Let us know what you think, show your friends, like us on Facebook and if you can, please make a pledge toward the project and help us create a comedy that Australia can be proud of.

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Thanks for your support!
Access to stream or download all six episodes for free as they are completed (prior to public release) and feel nice about the dream you have helped make come true.
The No-Frills DVD upon completion of the series - In essence, a burnt DVD containing all six episodes along with a personalised thank-you note from the creators. + The first tier's rewards.
The proper silver-back DVD upon completion of the series, containing all six episodes, commentaries and a lovely case. Also included will be a more sincere thank-you note from the creators. + The first tier's rewards.
The proper silver-back DVD upon completion of the series, containing all six episodes, commentaries and a lovely case. We will also include a borderline-sexual thank-you note and a crude, almost-pornographic drawing from the creators - both of which could be used for blackmail in the future, if our careers progress well. + The first tier's rewards.
The aforementioned DVD, plus a copy of the pilot episode script, signed (and coffee-stained by request) by the creators. + The first tier's rewards.
The aforementioned DVD, a script signed by the creators and a nice, shiny signed photo of your favourite cast member. + The first tier's rewards.
The aforementioned DVD, a script signed by the creators, a nice, shiny signed photo of the cast and a big, shiny A2 'Slappity Bam' Poster as featured in the show, signed by the 'Slappity Bam' cast. + The first tier's rewards.
Your name given a wacky credit in the closing titles of an episode. Examples include 'Wasp Underling' or 'Cast poisoned by'. + The previous tier's rewards. + The first tier's rewards.
The DVD, a signed script, a shiny signed photo of the cast, an A2 signed 'Slappity Bam' poster, AND your very own, personalised theme song from the genius who brought you Smooth Jazz Nyan Cat, SALT, and the f**cking annoying Stapler song from the Pilot episode. + The first tier's rewards.
The DVD, a signed script, a shiny signed photo of the cast, A2 'Slappity Bam' poster signed by the 'Slappity Bam' cast, AND your very own video-recorded personalised thank-you message from ‘Kevin’ and ‘Jacob’ to show-off to your otherwise unimpressed and disrespectful children. + The first tier's rewards.
You get the whole shebang; DVD, script, photo, poster and video-recorded thank-you message, PLUS an Executive Producer title in the credits. You also receive our undying love, a heart-warming posted letter of thanks and, should we ever meet, a light, apparently formal, but nevertheless suggestive kiss on the cheek. + The first tier's rewards.
You get everything from the last tier, including the Exec Producer credit, but instead of a plain old video-recorded message, you’ll receive a personalised thank-you musical video, starring our very talented musically trained cast. You also receive our undying love, a heart-warming posted letter of thanks and, should we ever meet, a light, apparently formal, but nevertheless suggestive kiss on the cheek COMPLETE with optional subtle brush against outer-thigh. + The first tier's rewards.
Five signed copies of the DVD, a signed script, photo and video-recorded thank-you message, PLUS an Executive Producer title in the credits. Not only that, creators Lucas and Tom will personally deliver it all to your door, along with a high-five from each of us. Lucas & Tom's personal delivery-and-high-five service only available to Australian residents. + The first tier's rewards.